tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10409202.post115159612785832241..comments2023-07-02T07:40:10.811-07:00Comments on Whiny the Moo: The Man Of My DreamsMoohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13551541079627465573noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10409202.post-1153923782421482542006-07-26T07:23:00.000-07:002006-07-26T07:23:00.000-07:00You write very fluently Mukta... and with sensitiv...You write very fluently Mukta... and with sensitivity. You have captured the entire experience very lucidly, the reading is smooth. On the other hand, I thought the ending was predictable.<BR/><BR/>There are a few inelegant/imprecise expressions... You might want to identify and edit them yourself. <BR/><BR/>"Back to the present situation..." I suggest you drop this sentence, don't make it explicit. Just continue into the next para, let it flow naturally from thoughts to external action.<BR/><BR/>Enjoyed visiting your page. :)Sarojahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11672546030019787651noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10409202.post-1151907094632191762006-07-02T23:11:00.000-07:002006-07-02T23:11:00.000-07:00YOU IDIOTS....if you havent noticed, i had taken t...YOU IDIOTS....<BR/><BR/>if you havent noticed, i had taken these stories off. just reposted them.....not so much in love with them that i'd post them again and again. Use thy brains...<BR/><BR/>@ maybe<BR/><BR/>please don't leave stray comments if you don't want to leave your name.Moohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13551541079627465573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10409202.post-1151871594627899762006-07-02T13:19:00.000-07:002006-07-02T13:19:00.000-07:00Nice. Now how about something different?Nice. Now how about something different?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10409202.post-1151694072218370332006-06-30T12:01:00.000-07:002006-06-30T12:01:00.000-07:00Good One.Kabhi Kabhi Accha Likhe Leti Ho !!Good One.Kabhi Kabhi Accha Likhe Leti Ho !!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com